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The author of the book: R.L. Mathewson
Language: English
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Edition: R.L. Mathewson
Date of issue: October 19th 2015

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Wow, I haven't hated a book so much in a long time. I love the Neighbor from Hell series and was really looking forward to the Honeymoon from Hell novellas.

The first problem was the editing. The novella was typo ridden. I found 11 before I stopped counting. In two additional places I noticed the wrong character's name was used. All the chapters from the hero's point of view referred to him as "he". Unfortunately, there are three "he"s in the story and it's not always clear who "he" is referring to. There were many times where directly following a paragraph where Trevor, Jason, or Ethan are named doing something, "he" is written as doing something that doesn't follow. When I read further down into the next paragraph, "he" is now talking about his wife so I know it must be Danny referred to in the prior paragraph. There were many paragraphs that consisted of one long run on sentence. The one I marked was 51 words long. These sentences are difficult to follow and it's annoying to have to decode them. All these technical problems pulled me out of the story and made it impossible to enjoy reading it.

There were other problems that made it hard to read. There were a couple of continuity problems I noticed. This is from near the beginning of the story: "While most of the men in his family thought that the Bradford curse was bullshit, he knew better. He'd seen the curse hit his uncles and cousins enough times over the years to know better than to risk it." This is from near the end of the story after they'd actually experienced the curse: "He didn't give a flying fuck if the curse was nothing more than just bullshit stories passed down from generation to generation to fuck with their heads. The only thing that mattered was his family and he wasn't going to take any risks, which meant that they needed to continue heading home tonight."

The last thing I'll mention is the repetition. I did a search for "balls" and found twelve references to Danny's balls getting kicked or otherwise injured. Enough! I get that he's being a typical Bradford jerk and she's a typical Bradford wife, but find another way to express it. The other example of the repetition are the frequent recaps of the story. It's a novella - I think I can remember what happened.

So, while I love the characters and the Bradford craziness, I hated this story. It seemed like it was written in a few days and released without any critical review.

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Ebook Honeymoon from Hell V read Online! Hello, my name is R.L. Mathewson :)

Before I tried my hand at writing I was a receptionist, cafeteria worker at the college I attended, museum worker, bellhop, and about a dozen other different things that are pretty embarrassing so we're just going to skip over those things and pretend that they never happened ;D

At some point I got a little direction in my life and tried my hand at emergency medicine, since I am, or at least was, deathly afraid of needles I opted for the fun job in EMS, an EMT. It was a fun job, a bit stressful, but I learned a great deal and had the opportunity to meet people from all walks of life. I learned a great deal from my patients and have never forgotten the wisdom they imparted on me. After a short stint as a Residential Home worker I decided to try the stay-at-home mom job and found out something very important.

I can't just sit around with nothing to do while I try to be deathly silent so that I don't wake up one of my children and send them into a blood curdling screaming fit. So, to fill the time I started to read again. When I was in school I was a bookworm, but got away from it as I grew older. I was drawn back into my love of reading by Julia Quinn's What Happens In London. It was a wonderful, witty book and I fell instantly in love with romance novels.

Some of the romance novels that I read were great and I couldn't get enough, I started to play with the idea of writing a book. Several months later I finally gave in and tried. For four months straight I worked day and night until finally I finished my first book. Then of course I re-read what I wrote, cringed and deleted the entire book and started over again. I started working on other projects and soon had two finished books, Tall, Dark & Lonely: A Pyte Series Novel and A Humble Heart: A Hollywood Heart's Novel. It was a very exciting time except for one little problem......

I had absolutely no idea what to do with the books now that they were done. So, of course I put the books aside and forgot about them for a little while I worked on other books. Months later I decided that maybe I should do something with them. I looked into getting published, admittedly not very hard since what I read about the publishing process wasn't exactly making me jump and down with excitement.

After reading an article about self-publishing I knew that was the way I wanted to go. I like the freedom to write what I want, when I want and publish a story that I hope others will enjoy reading. It gives me a great deal of freedom and allows me to retain full control over my work, which of course allows me to set the prices of my books and make them affordable for everyone :) Which of course is the reasoning behind the $0.99 price tag for my books.

That's how I became a writer and why I self-publish. Well, that and I'm pretty laid back and don't want to be hassled with contractual obligations. That would just cut into my writing time, time with my kids, reading time and my hot cocoa addiction. Yes, I am thoroughly addicted to hot cocoa and if you're interested in experiencing the perfect cup of cocoa you can find the recipe for my cocoa somewhere on my author blog.



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